everyone builds something. a dream, a version of themselves, a life they believed in.
and everyone watches it crack at some point.
but the last line β βi wanted to be unbreakableβ β thatβs not the sound of something falling apart. thatβs the sound of someone at least trying.
"i wanted to be unbreakable" β everything before it builds to that one line.
the poem carries something heavy. are you okay?
thank you so much! yes- i wrote this a while back! π€
"I wanted to be unbreakable."- The indomitable human spirit, yet how fragile it can be...
is the human spirit indomitable? or do we just pretend it is?
At the end of the day, it's all in our minds.
Our perspectives shape our decisions and the way we think.
So pretending to be indomitable for a long time might actually result in it being a trait.
Wow! What a perspective.
Loved it!!
thank you! π
You made something heavy feel meaningful.
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you didnβt just want to build something lasting you wanted to be the one thing that doesnβt break
everyone builds something. a dream, a version of themselves, a life they believed in.
and everyone watches it crack at some point.
but the last line β βi wanted to be unbreakableβ β thatβs not the sound of something falling apart. thatβs the sound of someone at least trying.
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